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angels
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 Subject: *~~Bait Baazi~~*  Fri Sep 05, 2008 8:40 pm |
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Bait Baazi
جیسا کہ آپ کو بیت بازی کے رولز تو معلوم ہی ہوں گے جس لفظ پر شعر ختم ہو گا اسی لفظ سے اگلا شعر شروع ہو
بیت بازی کے ٹاپک میں کوئی شعر دو بار پوسٹ نہیں کیا جانا چاہیے ۔ ہاں اگر کوئی شعر شاعری کے ٹاپک میں موجود ہے لیکن بیت بازی کے ٹاپک میں نہیں ہے تو پوسٹ کیا جا سکتا ہے ۔
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angels
Full Moderator
Number of posts: 567
Age: 23
Location: Pakistan
Points: 817
Reputation: 0
Join Date: 2008-09-05
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Fri Sep 05, 2008 8:43 pm |
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تجھی سے ابتدا ہے، تو ہی اک دن انتہا ہو گا
صدائے ساز ہوگی اور نہ ساز بے صدا ہو گا
آخری لفظ الف ہے
Last word is Alif
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Abid
Member Stage 4
Number of posts: 124
Age: 37
Location: Mansehra (NWFP)
Points: 218
Reputation: 0
Join Date: 2008-08-16
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:37 am |
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ai aashiq na puuch zindagii kyaa hai
zindagii to taKhallus hai muhabbat kaa
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_love_
Founder
Number of posts: 183
Location: Pakistan
Points: 313
Reputation: 0
Join Date: 2008-08-12
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:49 am |
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اینجل جی آپ کا بہت شکر یہ آپ نے ایک اچھا سلسلہ شر وع کیا ہے
عابد صاحب آپ کا بھی بہت شکریہ کہ آپ نے اس ٹاپک میں حصہ لیا۔۔
اے طاہر لاہوتی اس رزق سے موت اچھی
جس رزق سے آتی ہو پر واز میں کوتاہی۔۔
آخری لفظ ہے ی
Last word is Ye
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Asim
Member Stage 2
Number of posts: 57
Age: 35
Points: 91
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Join Date: 2008-08-20
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Sat Sep 06, 2008 12:26 pm |
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yun din aiseey guzaartaa hai koi
jaisey ahsaan utaarta hai koi
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Zia
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Number of posts: 1483
Age: 27
Location: Karachi
Points: 1727
Reputation: 3
Join Date: 2008-08-12
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Sat Sep 06, 2008 12:27 pm |
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YE DUNIA YE MAFIL MARE KAM KI NAHI................
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_love_
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Number of posts: 183
Location: Pakistan
Points: 313
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Sat Sep 06, 2008 12:31 pm |
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| Zia wrote: | | YE DUNIA YE MAFIL MARE KAM KI NAHI................ |
ضیا بھائی آپ کی شاعری نا مکل ہے
شعر کم از کم دو لائنیں اور زیا دہ سے زیادہ چار لائینں ہونی چاہیے۔۔شکریہ
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Zia
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Sat Sep 06, 2008 12:32 pm |
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SORRY ADMIN SB.............
Ye Dil Tum se Pyaar karna chahta hai
Apni Mohabbat ka Iqraar karna chahta hai
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Asim
Member Stage 2
Number of posts: 57
Age: 35
Points: 91
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Join Date: 2008-08-20
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Sat Sep 06, 2008 12:33 pm |
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yun zindagi ki rah main takragaya koi
ek rooshni andheerey main bikhragaya koi
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SajjadKhan
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Number of posts: 1062
Age: 25
Location: FaR AwAy In ThE SeA
Points: 1607
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Join Date: 2008-08-12
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Sat Sep 06, 2008 12:36 pm |
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کیا ہو رہا ہے بڑی شعر و شاعری کی محفل جمی ہے۔۔
چلو ہم بھی اس میں حصہ لیتے ہیں۔۔
Ye ejaz hai Husn-e-awargi ka
Jahan bhi gaye Dastan chor aye
Bohot hum safar mile zindagi mai
Najane kis ko kahan chor aye..
Last word is YE
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Zia
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Number of posts: 1483
Age: 27
Location: Karachi
Points: 1727
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Sat Sep 06, 2008 12:38 pm |
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YE bas itna Samajh lena kay,
Mai bhi tumsay ROOTH kar khush nahi hoon,
Mai bhi tumsay dubara BAAT karna chahta hoon,
Lekin phir bhi mai tumhay na manao,
Tau ye bhi samajh lena kay,
Mai uss HASEEN Pal ka Intzaar kar raha honga,
Jab mai tumhay sabse DILNASHEEN Dhang se mana saku,
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Asim
Member Stage 2
Number of posts: 57
Age: 35
Points: 91
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Sat Sep 06, 2008 1:11 pm |
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zia bhai yeh kiya ho raha hai sheer o shaeeri janab nazmain nahin plz reham roza 13 ghantey ka hai
ziyaada parheengey tu roza lage ga
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SajjadKhan
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Number of posts: 1062
Age: 25
Location: FaR AwAy In ThE SeA
Points: 1607
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Sat Sep 06, 2008 1:13 pm |
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Bohot Ache Zia bahi,, kia baat hai aap ke Shayri ke.... :=D>
Asim bhai.. Aap ka bhi jawab nahi..  ) )
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angels
Full Moderator
Number of posts: 567
Age: 23
Location: Pakistan
Points: 817
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Join Date: 2008-09-05
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Sat Sep 06, 2008 9:31 pm |
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Najane konsa Aaseb dil mai rehta hai..
Ke jo bhi tehra akhir makan chor gaya
Last word is Alif
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Abid
Member Stage 4
Number of posts: 124
Age: 37
Location: Mansehra (NWFP)
Points: 218
Reputation: 0
Join Date: 2008-08-16
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| Subject: Re: *~~Bait Baazi~~* Mon Sep 08, 2008 11:28 am |
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yaad me unki hamne aansu bahaye day & night,
ab halat ye hai ki dikhta hai sab kuch black & white
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